IELTS WRITING 18 6 2016
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Bài mẫu band 8.0+ cho đề Writing ngày 18/06/2016
Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not
popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
Sample band 8.0
The unpopularity of using bicycle in numerous places has been brought into question
although there is little doubt about its friendly effects on the environment compared to
cars or airplanes. The reasons for this are varied and several feasible solutions would be
proposed in the essay below.
There are two main underlying explanations for the uncommon use of bicycles. Firstly, it
would consume a considerable amount of time to travel by this means of transport,
which, according to many, justifies the price of potential environmental damage caused
by other types of vehicles. This is because it fails to benefit dwellers of major cities in
particular when their pace of working life wouldeclipse the values of using bicycles to
the environment. Secondly, modern people are becoming less concerned about the
negative impact that their daily use of cars and public transportation would inflict on
their surroundings. Therefore, it is rather impractical to expect cycling in cities, or even
the countryside.
The government play a vital role in encouraging the use of this environmentally friendly
vehicle. They could conduct monthly green days that by law require citizens to cycle to
work to get people involved in protecting their environment. In the long term, such an
initiative would help to gradually form a habit of cycling among occupied individuals.
More importantly, propagation via various means of media along with optional courses
about the advantages of cycling to the environment at schools seem imperative to
heighten social awareness of this matter.
In conclusion, cycling, regardless of its positive influences on the environment, has
become a rare picture in the modern world for a number of reasons; and the government
should take immediate actions to improve this situation.
(284 words)
Useful vocabulary and structures
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The uncommon use of bicycles: Sự sử dụng không phổ biến của xe đạp
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To fail to benefit major city dwellers in particular: Không có lợi ích với những
người sống ở thành phố lớn
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To eclipse the values of using bicycles to the environment: Che lấp những giá trị
của việc sử dụng xe đạp đối với môi trường
ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi
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To be rather impractical to expect cycling: Khá là phi thực tế để hi vọng mọi
người sẽ dùng xe đạp
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The use of this environmentally friendly vehicle: Việc sử dụng phương tiện thân
thiện với môi trường
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Monthly green days: Những ngày vì môi trường hàng tháng
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Form a habit of cycling: Tạo thói quen dùng xe đạp
ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi
