IELTS WRITING 12 03 2016
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Bài mẫu band 8.0++ cho đề thi ngày 12/3/2016
Topic:
Some believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import films and TV programmes,
while others think it is better for a country to have their own films and TV programmes.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Bài mẫu band 8.0+ - Toàn ZIM
(1) There has been a difference of opinion regarding the merits of foreign movies and TV
channels to the culture of a country as people believe domestic products would be
better. (2) From my perspective, both of those categories are equally important.
(3) On the one hand, people usually believe foreign films and TV telecasts can contribute
to the cultural diversity of a nation. (4)Fascinating social norms and practices, such as public
hugging which is common in the US, can follow the wave to other nations as
Hollywood blockbusters are becoming more popular. (5) This phenomenon is believed to
benefit the richness of the host country’s traditional backgrounds. (6) Moreover, the import
of international movies and TV shows could perfect the flaws of thecountry’s sets of
beliefs. (7) In Vietnam, for example, the ceremony of funerals is often perpetuated
with ongoing depraved customs such as gambling and drinking. (8) Since the arrival of TV
shows from more developed nations, which triggers a new and civilized way of thinking, such
practices have been gradually aborted.
(9) On the other hand, it appears to me that producing local movies and TV programs has the
same importance. (10) Citizens of a country would be able to acquire knowledge about their
own culture. (11) Apparenly, profound insights of traditional values can be vividly conveyed in
cinemas and on the media if the content is made by local people. (12)The second point to be
considered is that this way can relieve the worry of cultural assimilation which has emerged
as a detriment to the existence of a country’s traditional beliefs and customs. (13) In fact,
if exotic practices are absorded thoughtlessly, it might lead to the oblivion of the longstanding ethics, which emphasizes the necessity for domestic products.
(14) In conclusion, I would argue that both types of films and TV telecasts play an equal role
in a country’s culture.
ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi
(304 words) – Band 8+
Essay analysis:
Với chủ đề này thì mình đưa ra 2 idea cho mỗi arugment như sau:
Foreign films and TV programs:
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Cultural diversity
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Perfect the flaws of the country’s sets of beliefs.
Domestic films and TV programs:
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Acquire knowledge about national culture
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Relieve the worry of cultural assimilation
Một số từ vựng hữu ích mà mọi người có thể học được như là:
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TV telecasts: Chương trình TV
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Cultural diversity: sự đa dạng văn hóa
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Depraved customs: hủ tục
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Cultural assimilation: sự hòa tan văn hóa
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Exotic practices: tục lệ xa lạ
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Long-standing ethics: chuẩn mực đạo đức lâu đời
1- Câu phức
2- Câu đơn
3- Câu phức
4- Câu phức
5- Câu đơn
6- Câu đơn
7- Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
8- Câu phức
9- Câu đơn
10- Câu đơn
11- Câu phức
12- Câu đơn mở rộng thành phần
13- Câu phức
14- Câu phức
ZIM ACADEMY
Room 2501, Ocean Group Building, 19 Nguyen Trai, Thanh Xuan Dist, Hanoi
