Chapter 10
Delivering Negative
Messages
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Negative Messages
Information conveyed is negative
Audience’s reaction is negative
Message does not benefit them
Usually they experience
disappointment or anger
Varieties
Rejections,
refusals
Policy changes not
benefiting customer
Poor performance
appraisals
Disciplinary notices
Insulting, intrusive
requests
Product recalls
102
Purposes
Primary Purposes
To
give audience bad news
To have audience read, understand, and accept
message
To maintain as much goodwill as possible
Secondary Purposes
To
build good image of communicator
To build good image of communicator’s organization
To avoid future messages on same subject
103
Purposes
Want audience to feel
They have been taken
seriously
The decision is fair and
reasonable
If they were in your
situation, they would
make the same
decision
104
Organizing Negative Messages:
Clients & Customers
1. When
you have a reason that the
audience will understand and accept, give
the reason before the refusal
2. Give the negative information, just once
3. Present an alternative or compromise
4. End with positive forward-looking
statement
105
Organizing Negative Messages:
Superiors
1. Describe
problem clearly
2. Tell how it happened
3. Describe the options for fixing it
4. Recommend a solution and ask for action
106
Organizing Negative Messages:
Peers & Subordinates
1. Describe
problem objectively, clearly
2. Present an alternative or compromise, if
available
3. Ask for input or action, if possible
May suggest helpful solutions
Audience may accept outcomes better
107
Parts: Subject Lines
Include the topic, not the specific negative
Use negative subject lines when the
audience
May ignore message
Needs information to act
Keep in mind not everyone reads all their
messages
Be cautious of neutral subject lines
108
Parts: Buffers
109
Parts: Reasons
Clear, convincing reasons precede
refusal
Prepare audience for refusal
Help audience accept refusal
Don’t hide behind company policy
Show how policy benefits audience
If no benefit, omit policy from message
1010
Parts: Refusals
Put refusal in ¶ with reason to
deemphasize
Imply refusal if you can
Make it crystal clear
Finalize message on subject
Don’t write 2nd message to say no
1011
Parts: Alternatives
Offers way to get what
audience wants
Shows you care about
audience’s needs
Returns audience’s
psychological freedom
(freedom of choice)
Allows you to end on
positive note
1012
Parts: Endings
Refer to a good alternative at end
Best endings look to future
Avoid insincere endings:
Please let us know if we can be of
further help.
1013
Apologies
Don’t apologize
If correcting only small error
When not at fault
Do apologize
Only once
Early in message
Briefly
Sincerely
By focusing on how to correct situation
1014
Tone in Negative Messages
Tone—implied attitude of the author
toward the audience and subject
Show you took request seriously
Use positive emphasis and you-attitude
Think about visual appearance
Consider timing of message
1015
Varieties: Claims and Complaints
Needed when something has gone
wrong
Use direct organization pattern
Give supporting facts and identifiers
Avoid anger and sarcasm or threats that
you will never use company again
1016
Varieties: Rejections and Refusals
Requests from external audience
Try to use a buffer
Give specific reasons
Give alternative, if any
Requests from internal audience
Use knowledge of culture, individual to craft
reply
1017
Varieties: Disciplinary Notices and
Performance Appraisals
Present directly—no buffer
Cite specific observations of behavior
Not inferences
Include dates, quantities
State when employee may return to
work, if disciplinary action is taken
1018
Varieties: Layoffs and Firings
If company likely to fold, tell early
Give honest reasons for firing
Unrelated face-saving reason may
create legal liability
Avoid broadcasting reasons to
avoid defamation lawsuit
Deliver orally; backup in writing
1019
Using Technology
Deliver bad news orally when possible
Use technology for widespread negative
messages
E-mail
Social media
1020