Chapter 3
Building Goodwill
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Chapter 3 Learning Objectives
LO 3-1 Create you-attitude
LO 3-2 Create positive emphasis
LO 3-3 Improve tone in business communications
LO 3-4 Reduce bias in business communications
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Goodwill
Build goodwill through
You-attitude
Positive emphasis
Bias-free language
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YouAttitude
Looks at things from audience’s
viewpoint
Emphasizes what audience wants to
know
Respects audience’s intelligence
Protects audience’s ego
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Five Ways to Create YouAttitude
1. Talk
about audience, not yourself.
2. Refer to audience’s request or order.
3. Don’t talk about feelings.
4. In positive situations, use you more often
than I. Use we when it includes the
audience.
5. In negative situations, avoid you.
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Talk About Audience, Not Yourself
Tell how message affects the audience
Don’t mention communicator’s work or
generosity
Stress what audience wants to know
Lacks you-attitude
Yourself
We designed a new Web site
for you.
Contains you-attitude
Your Web site redesign is now
online.
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Refer to Audience’s Request or
Order
Make specific references, not generic
Name content of order for person or
small business
Cite purchase order numbers for
customers that order often
Lacks you-attitude
We shipped your order.
Contains you-attitude
Your order for 235 bicycle tires will
arrive on Sept. 23.
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Don’t Talk About Feelings
Express your feelings to
Offer sympathy to audience
Congratulate audience
Don’t talk about audience’s feelings
Don’t predict audience’s response
Give audience good news
Lacks you-attitude
We are excited to have you as a customer.
Contains you-attitude
Your new membership guarantees the
lowest prices possible.
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In Positive Situations, Use You More Often
Than I. Use We If It Includes the Audience
Use you in positive situations
Avoid I in printed text
Avoid we if it excludes the audience
Lacks you-attitude
We are now giving you a raise.
Contains you-attitude
Your raise will be effective Jan. 1.
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Avoid You in Negative Situations
Protect audience’s ego
Avoid assigning blame
Use passive verbs
Use impersonal style
Lacks you-attitude
You were late this morning.
Contains you-attitude
The timecard was not punched on
time today.
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Positive Emphasis
Way of looking at situations
Communication focuses on the positive
Create positive emphasis through
Words
Information
Organization
Layout
Half full or half empty?
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Five Ways to Create Positive
Emphasis
1. Avoid
negative words
2. Beware of hidden negatives
3. Focus on what audience can do, not
limitations
4. Justify negative information by giving
reason or linking to audience benefit
5. Put negative information in the middle
and present it compactly
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Tone, Power, and Politeness
Tone – implied attitude of the
communicator toward the audience
Good tone –
Businesslike, not stiff
Friendly, not phony
Confident, not arrogant
Polite, not groveling
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BiasFree Language
Words that do not discriminate on basis of
Sex
Age
Race
Ethnicity
Physical condition
Religion
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