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GIỚI THIỆU CHUNG ... 6

A. ĐỀ THI WRITING TASK 2 ... 7

B. BÀI CHỮA THAM KHẢO ... 12

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GIỚI THIỆU CHUNG

Để các bạn có thêm nguồn bài mẫu hữu ích trong q trình ơn thi, IELTS Xn Phi xin gửi tặng các bạn bộ lời giải tham khảo 1 số đề thi thực tế Writing Task 2. Sách tổng hợp 45 bài mẫu band 8+ cho các chủ đề xuất hiện trong năm 2022 giúp các bạn dễ dàng hình dung một cách tổng quát và thực tế về độ khó của bài thi viết Task 2 cũng như xu hướng ra đề IELTS năm nay.

Các bài viết đều được thầy Phạm Xuân Phi (IELTS 8.0) và cựu giám khảo Hội đồng Anh trực tiếp viết và biên soạn để đảm bảo độ chính xác. Với mỗi bài viết mẫu chúng mình đều đính kèm danh sách từ vựng và cấu trúc hay, các bạn có thể lọc 5-7 từ/cụm từ mình tâm đắc nhất rồi “tủ” cho từng chủ đề, lúc thi có gặp thì dùng luôn cho tiết kiệm thời gian.

Writing thực sự là một kỹ năng khó khiến chúng ta thở dài ngao ngán. Vậy nên tâm lý chung của nhiều bạn mục tiêu band thấp là bỏ qua và dồn tâm sức vào những kỹ năng còn lại với hy vọng vớt vát được bao nhiêu tốt bấy nhiêu. Nhưng nếu bạn tham vọng mục tiêu cao hơn, hay đơn giản chỉ muốn có cảm giác thành tựu chinh phục được cả 4 kỹ năng, thì chẳng cịn cách nào khác ngồi việc Đọc và Luyện tập thật nhiều. Đọc các bài báo học thuật, bài mẫu IELTS Writing chất lượng; luyện viết thường xuyên và quan trọng nhất là nhờ ai đó có chun mơn về IELTS sửa bài giúp mình. Hy vọng IELTS Xuân Phi có thể cùng bước với các bạn trên con đường thoát trầm cảm Writing.

Đăng ký tham gia khóa học IELTS Writing chuyên sâu:

Tham gia nhóm Ở đây IELTS Xuân Phi chữa Writing miễn phí:

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A. ĐỀ THI VIẾT TASK 2

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3. 22/1/2022

In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

6. 26/2/2022

Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

7. 3/3/2022

Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produce positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

24. 09/07/2022

Large companies use sporting events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

25. 16/07/2022

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In some parts of the world it is increasingly popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

28. 11/08/2022

Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

29. 20/08/2022

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?

30. 27/08/2022

As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments encourage businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

31. 03/09/2022

Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people now use language in a less formal way than in the past. Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. But some people believe there are many factors that contribute to success at sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

43. 17/12/2022

In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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B. BÀI CHỮA THAM KHẢO

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1. 08/01/2022

Question: Some people could be naturally good leaders. Others believe that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

ANSWER (8.0+):

A debate has been growing recently over whether leadership is an innate trait or a

skill that is acquired through learning. In my estimation, being a leader is a skill that can

be learned through extensive training.

Firstly, it is reasonable to assume that leadership is sometimes innate. Individuals can be born with certain qualities that are predictive of a good leader such as

bravery, strategic intelligence and self-confidence. These traits can be passed down along a long lineage of successful leaders from one generation to the next. This is

did. Like his father, he was both tenacious and intelligent in guiding the company to long-term success by pursuing aggressive and forward-thinking strategies in

innovating Ford’s automotive technology. Thus, it is understandable why some would contend leadership can be acquired inherently.

However, a more persuasive case can be made for leadership as a learned

quality. Individuals can become leaders in a disciplined environment through the

process of training, practice and hands-on experience over time. For instance,

numerous reputed educational institutions throughout the world administer

leadership programs for those wanting to gain the required skill set to become

effective leaders. Within those programs there are courses intended to cover the necessary aspects of leadership such as management, problem solving, implementation of strategy and decision making. In addition, some of these programs include practical experience, where protégés can learn from current leaders about what it takes to take charge.

To conclude, while it is fair to assume that some are born with the qualities of a good leader, I would assert that leadership skills can be gained through education

and experience in a structured environment.

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WORD LIST:

công

Forward-thinking strategies ChiĀn lược tiĀn tới

A disciplined environment M⌀t môi trường quy c甃ऀ

To be naturally bestowed with sth Được trao tặng c愃Āi g椃

A structured environment M⌀t môi trường c漃Ā cĀu tr甃Āc

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2. 15/01/2022

Question: Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for both themselves and their employers. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

ANSWER (8.0+):

The topic of changing jobs can be a sensitive topic, with some believing that doing so

training costs. I, however, contend that it is more disadvantageous to change jobs since

new employees.

A key benefit of workers changing jobs regularly is that they can be equipped with a

more diverse skill set. As different jobs utilize different knowledge bases, employees may be able to acquire a wide-ranging variety of professional skills. Therefore, in the

future when a new job is offered to them, employees will be better prepared for the work entailed at any given position. For companies, when their employees switch occupations, they can save time and money on training. Firms can do this by hiring

someone with equal or more experience than the previous person in the same field.

Therefore, the quality of the products or services being offered by these firms will remain consistent.

to hire such individuals. Employers understandably may hold a prejudice against those

hopper’ will not be able to contribute to their company long-term and thus it would

be counterproductive to commit resources to them. When it comes to how companies themselves can be negatively affected by job hopping, they may continually

struggle when finding new employees who can meet their requirements. This is evident

with how international accounting firms have a higher-than-average turnover rate at the junior level, meaning that they are in a near-endless cycle of hiring new people.

In conclusion, while changing jobs can help workers acquire vital skills and companies save time and money for training, I would assert that the drawbacks are much more

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Continually struggle CĀ gắng liên t甃⌀c (m⌀t c愃Āch kh漃Ā khăn)

Diverse/expansive skill set B⌀ k礃̀ năng đa d愃⌀ng

Higher than average turnover rate T椃ऀ l⌀ ngh椃ऀ vi⌀c cao hơn trung b椃

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3. 22/1/2022

Question: In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

ANSWER (8.0+):

The problem of childhood obesity and its consequences for physical health has become a pressing issue globally, with some arguing that the government is primarily responsible. While this assertion is reasonable to some extent, I would contend that

the parents should take some responsibility as well as they are the primary

guardians of their children.

It is valid to assert that the government should assume responsibility for tackling the problem of child obesity. States have the power and resources to enact laws or

policies that can actively promote a healthier lifestyle and therefore curb the obesity

rate among children. Consequently, children can be compelled to comply with these policies and change their habits to live more healthily and lose weight. To give an

example, the Vietnamese government has recently promulgated a directive that

requires local schools to provide healthy school meals, encourages children to engage

in physical activities and prohibits the advertising and sharing of sugary drinks and

food. This is intended to curb the obesity rate among children in Vietnam, which has

been rising in the past decade.

However, the parents of these children should assume a secondary role in rectifying

this problem as well. Since they are already the primary guardians responsible for

feeding and taking care of their offspring, it is only natural for parents to monitor their

diet and commitment to exercise. If parents shirk these obligations, then their children

are more likely to remain obese and in poor health in the long-term. For example, a recent survey has reported that the majority of European parents typically encourage their children to engage in weekly exercise programs to ensure that they will maintain a healthy weight. They believe in this way, children can physically develop normally

and not be greatly affected by ailments associated with obesity.

In conclusion, while the government should take a leading responsibility in tackling the

problem of child obesity given their legitimate power in enacting laws, I would

ultimately assert that the parents should also share this burden as they are

exercise habits.

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Shoulder the burden G愃Ānh ch椃⌀u m⌀t g愃Ānh nặng

To assume responsibility Nh⌀n tr愃Āch nhi⌀m cho m⌀t vi⌀c g椃

The power and resources to enact laws or policies

To rectify sth Gi愃ऀi quyĀt, sửa sai m⌀t vi⌀c g椃

Shirk an obligation TrĀn tr愃Ānh tr愃Āch nhi⌀m

Not be affected by ailments associated with obesity

Directly accountable C漃Ā tr愃Āch nhi⌀m trực tiĀp

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The growing awareness of healthy lifestyles can be ascribed to the far-reaching

impact of mass media. It is now common to watch movies and TV shows featuring

celebrities who are fit, implicitly introducing new standards of beauty that are often attainable. Hence, audiences may try to research and imitate the diet and exercise

regimens of well-known celebrities and become healthier in the process. This can be

observed widely in numerous health magazines such as Men’s Health and Women’s Health that cater to this desire by publishing the daily fitness routines and meal plans of stars. Fans can then read these magazines online and adopt the routines to learn the

best practices of successful role models and consistently stay in good shape.

In order for this trend to continue to flourish, definitive steps must be taken by the government. The first is to introduce legislation that requires more physical activities to be taught at school. This can include sports such as football, basketball and other typical exercises such as jogging. By creating additional activities for schoolchildren to

long-term. The second measure would be for the state to promulgate a tax on the

purchase of processed food products. As consumers may be unwilling to pay more

given the higher price, such a reform would encourage them to buy naturally produced

foods and in turn embrace healthier eating habits.

In conclusion, thanks to mass media, more people are embracing wholesome

lifestyles and this can be further encouraged by mandatory physical education at

school and taxes on processed food. It is crucial that the last solution be affordable in order to enjoy widespread adoption.

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The influence of mass media Sự 愃ऀnh hưởng c甃ऀa phương ti⌀n thông tin đ愃⌀i chúng

Enact legislation and incorporate more physical activities into schools

Ban h愃chĀt hơn v愃

The fitness level of a nation’s population Mức đ⌀ thऀ chĀt c甃ऀa dân sĀ m⌀t quĀc gia

May be inclined to buy naturally produced foods

C漃Ā thऀ c漃Ā xu hướng mua thực phऀm s愃ऀn xuĀt tự nhiên

Embracing wholesome lifestyles Thực hi⌀n lĀi sĀng l愃

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5. 17/2/2022

Question: Some people think that people should be given the right to use fresh water as much as they like. Others believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

ANSWER (8.0+):

There are differing opinions in regard to the freedom to use fresh water. Some believe

citizens should have the right to use fresh water freely, while others assert that the state should regulate the amount of fresh water citizens can use. This essay will discuss both of these arguments and explain my thoughts on why the government should manage the use of freshwater.

On the one hand, some see the right to fresh water as a basic human necessity.

According to the UN’s International Covenant on Economic, Social and Cultural Rights,

the right to water is an essential human right and all signatory nations of the covenant must ensure that their citizens have unrestricted access to fresh water. Thus, the governments of those nations are obliged to guarantee that their citizens can use fresh water in any amount to meet their fundamental needs such as cooking, cleaning and drinking. If citizens are not afforded adequate access to fresh water, it would be tantamount to an infringement on human rights and these citizens will

suffer greatly as a result.

On the other hand, others believe fresh water is a scarce resource and should therefore be controlled by the state. The global supply of fresh water is dwindling with each

passing decade due to numerous factors such as the greater frequency of droughts and

the majority of the world population will reside in water-stressed regions by the end

of the 21st century. Hence, the scarcity of fresh water should be addressed by the

government through the promulgation of policies and regulations intended to prolong

the supply of water in the long-term.

In conclusion, I believe that though people should have access to an adequate amount of fresh water for their survival, the state should intervene in not letting some people use too much water as this can lead to others not having enough of it.

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WORD LIST:

Signatory nations Các quĀc gia tham gia ký kĀt

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6. 26/2/2022

Question: Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

ANSWER (8.0+):

It has been observed that a large amount of time and funding has been allocated

towards wildlife protection. However, some argue that this funding could be put to

better use towards helping humanity. In this essay, I will explain my thoughts as to why I partially agree that time and money could be better spent on helping humanity.

On the one hand, the protection of wild animals can maintain the delicate balance of

the ecosystem. If one animal species becomes completely extinct, other species may

suffer from a lack of food as these preys may be their sole food source and then consequently become extinct themselves, massively disrupting the food chain. Hence the protection of wild animals cannot be understated and requires adequate funding

and time for it to continue in the long-term. This can be observed in the US, where the

Conservation Reserve Program assisted in increasing the population of native bird

species such as ducks, grouse and pheasants, owing to the abundant amount of money

and time dedicated by the government to supporting this program.

On the other hand, there are more important sectors to allocate funding to in order to

facilitate human development. While the protection of wild animals may not have a

direct effect on supporting humanity, there are other facets of human society that do,

such as infrastructure, healthcare and education. By devoting enough money and

time to bolstering these sectors, there can be marked improvements in the quality of

life for the human population. Venezuela for instance, is currently facing a financial crisis that started in 2013 which has led to the country struggling to improve the quality

before devoting funding to protecting native wildlife.

In conclusion, I somewhat believe that though an investment in preserving

animals may somehow maintain the balance of the ecosystem, our time and money

should be more justifiably spent on important sectors of the economy to improve people’s living standards.

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Wildlife protection B愃ऀo v⌀ đ⌀ng v⌀t hoang d愃̀

The delicate balance of the ecosystem Sự cân bằng mong manh c甃ऀa h⌀ sinh th愃Āi

Other facets of human society C愃Āc kh椃Āa c愃⌀nh kh愃Āc c甃ऀa x愃̀ h⌀i lo愃

To bolster these sectors Đऀ tăng cường c愃Āc lĩnh vực này

Marked improvements in the quality of life C愃ऀi thi⌀n r漃̀ r⌀t v

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7. 3/3/2022

Question: Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

ANSWER (8.0+):

It is argued that scientific research should be devoted to addressing global health

issues, but there are some who contend that there are more pressing problems to

focus on. This essay discusses both sides of this argument and why I partially agree with the latter opinion.

To begin with, some argue it is important that adequate attention is given to solving global health issues. Currently, there are many people who are finding it difficult to

afford medicine to be protected from diseases. To address this, scientists could strive

to devise new and more affordable alternatives so that those people can live healthily

in the long-term. This is evident with the Hepatitis B vaccine, as prior to its

invention medication for treating the virus was expensive. However, once the vaccine was presented as a more affordable option, more people were then administered the

vaccine and the infection rate had decreased by a considerable margin.

However, others argue that there are other issues that are more deserving of

attention from scientific research. One of them is global famine, as there are some

regions in the world that are suffering from crop shortages due to numerous factors

such as poor soil quality and pests. Therefore, scientific research could be devoted to

creating new genetically-modified crops that could withstand harsh conditions.

Another critical issue is global warming, as it could pose a greater threat to all life on

Earth than most plights on global health. Hence, scientific research could be valuable

in finding the causes of it as well as relevant solutions to curb the effects of it.

In conclusion, I agree that while it is important that scientific research should be dedicated to solving global health problems, there are more critical issues that need to be addressed such as reducing famine and mitigating global warming.

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Protected from diseases Được b愃ऀo v⌀ khỏi b⌀nh t⌀t

New and more affordable alternatives C愃Āc lựa chọn thay thĀ mới v愃

By a considerable margin Bằng m⌀t kho愃ऀng đ愃Āng kऀ

More deserving of attention Đ愃Āng được quan tâm hơn

To suffer from crop shortages Ch椃⌀u sự thiĀu h甃⌀t thu ho愃⌀ch từ mùa v甃⌀

c

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There has been a decline in the number of young people engaging in farming work,

which can be ascribed to the greater allure of factory-based jobs and the changing

perception resulting from the increased provision of education. Because of these

factors, it can be prudent for young people to pursue agricultural work.

Young people becoming more reluctant to work in farming can be explained as follows.

Firstly, the slump in young workers working in the agriculture industry can be

attributed to factory-based jobs being more attractive. In comparison to farming work,

factory jobs usually provide a more lucrative income and the working environment is

often more comfortable as workers get to be in an air-conditioned setting under a roof. Thus, young workers are more inclined to work in a factory instead of on a farm. In addition, with the greater provision of mass education to young people, more of them

have begun to perceive farming work to be below their standards. They are typically more drawn to jobs that are better suited to their elevated educational

background and skill set. Hence, they will likely consider agricultural work to not meet

those standards.

Due to the factors outlined above, young people should be encouraged to work in

agriculture. Firstly, farming jobs require a great deal of manpower to keep up with the currently growing demand for food. A dearth in personnel can hinder productivity in the agricultural industry and by extension the national food supply can be deleteriously

halted, which may lead to a domestic food crisis. Furthermore, farming work can be

a vocational pathway for young people. It provides them with practical skills such as

using heavy machinery and planting crops, as well as soft skills such as task management, organizational and communication skills. That way, young people can learn to be more resourceful and responsible in a professional setting.

In conclusion, the greater benefits provided by factory jobs and changing perception of farm work are the leading causes of the decline in young people working in agriculture. Therefore, they should be encouraged to work in that sector as it needs extensive

manpower and it can be a fruitful professional path for them to take.

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Greater allure of factory-based jobs Sức hĀp dẫn lớn hơn c甃ऀa c愃Āc công vi⌀c l愃nhà máy

Increased provision of education Tăng cường cung cĀp giáo d甃⌀c

The slump in young workers Sự s甃⌀t gi愃ऀm c甃ऀa lao đ⌀ng trẻ

A more lucrative income M⌀t thu nh⌀p hĀp dẫn hơn

Below one’s standards Dưới tiêu chuऀn c甃ऀa m⌀t người

A dearth in sth M⌀t sự khan hiĀm c甃ऀa c愃Āi g椃

Deleteriously halted Đ愃̀ t愃⌀m dừng m⌀t c愃Āch đ⌀c h愃⌀i

Domestic food crisis Kh甃ऀng ho愃ऀng lương thực trong nước

Fruitful professional path Con đường chuyên nghi⌀p th愃

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To begin with, there is a considerable disadvantage to teaching foreign languages to

primary school students. The main one is it adds to their already burdensome

volume of schoolwork. Since these primary school students are often subjected to a hectic curriculum with mounting homework and in-class assignments, the addition of

a foreign language may make it even more difficult for students to study effectively. For example, the Japanese Ministry of Education recently attempted to incorporate English

into the national curriculum for elementary students. However, it was met with

backlash from parents as they complained that their children are already encumbered with a heavy workload from other core subjects.

However, there are some major advantages a primary school student can gain in

learning foreign languages. First, they can be exposed to new and diverse cultures. As

acquire a greater understanding of how people of that nation typically communicate with each other and by extension how their society functions culturally. Second,

abilities. In doing this, they will learn how to recognize complex patterns and

use critical thinking skills to make sense of the new knowledge they are acquiring.

Hence, such skills are beneficial for a child’s education as they serve to expand the thinking abilities of the brain.

In conclusion, while learning a language can add to the already cumbersome amount

of schoolwork, I assert that it is more advantageous for primary schools to teach their students foreign languages as they can serve to expand their knowledge about new

foreign cultures and they help sharpen their cognitive skills.

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To be met with backlash Gặp ph愃ऀi ph愃ऀn ứng dữ d⌀i

A defining characteristic of sth M⌀t đặc điऀm đặc bi⌀t c甃ऀa m⌀t thứ g椃

Developing primary students’ cognitive abilities Phát triऀn năng lực nh⌀n thức c甃ऀa học sinh tiऀu học

Critical thinking skills K礃̀ năng tư duy ph愃ऀn bi⌀n

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To begin with, there are a few drawbacks to living away from loved ones to find work.

Firstly, people can be vulnerable to various mental health issues. This is because they can miss being in the company of friends and family and sharing with them their developments and problems in life, as well as being comforted by them when life

becomes tough. Therefore, these people can experience feelings of anxiety and depression, which may disrupt their motivation to find work. Secondly, it may be

difficult for people to get immediate help when they are away from home. For instance, if they have a medical emergency, their next of kin or close friends may not be there to help them. Hence, they will have to rely on outside assistance such as

medical services or close neighbours, which can be inconvenient and expensive.

However, the benefits of this practice are greater than the drawbacks. Firstly, isolating

oneself from others in search of a job can allow them to endeavour to live more independently. By finding a place of their own and conducting their own research to

find a job, they can learn what it means to struggle to earn their own living and maintain

their own lifestyle. In the process, they are more likely to grow into self-reliant people.

Secondly, individuals are less likely to be influenced by their friends and family. Since

different people may have varying ideas about what kind of employment one should

friends and family, they will be able to more freely forge their own career path.

In conclusion, while people can be more susceptible to mental health problems and

have a lack of immediate assistance, it is more advantageous for people to live away from friends and family in looking for work, as they can become more independent in their lifestyle and be free to pursue whatever job they desire.

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To be vulnerable to sth Dễ b椃⌀ tổn thương bởi m⌀t đi

To be comforted by sth/sb Được an 甃ऀi bởi ai đ漃Ā/c愃Āi g椃

Get immediate help Nh⌀n trợ gi甃Āp ngay l⌀p tức

Conducting their own research Thực hi⌀n những nghiên cứu c甃ऀa riêng họ

More susceptible to sth Dễ b椃⌀ 愃ऀnh hưởng hơn bởi m⌀t c愃Āi g椃

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It is observed that the ratio of older to younger people will grow in the coming

decades across most nations. This essay will explain why this is ultimately a negative

development for society in the long term.

Firstly, having a greater proportion of elderly people can put a strain on the state

budget. The government may have to increase its expenditure on the healthcare

system since senior citizens are more prone to serious and often costly ailments such

as heart disease and strokes than younger people. However, since there are other important sectors that the government has to allocate funding to such as infrastructure, education and defense, spending more to support the elderly may

eventually leave little financial resources for those mentioned fields. This could adversely impact the meaningful progress being made in said fields and by

extension detrimentally affect the socioeconomic development of a country.

Secondly, the growth in the number of elderly people will damage the national

workforce. Since they are not as physically or mentally strong as younger people, most

growth. Consequently, with an inadequate number of younger people to replace the

aging population in terms of employment, a shrinking workforce can impede economic

growth which in turn can halt meaningful strides towards better standards of living.

This is evident in the case of blue-collar jobs, as workers who are much older cannot work as effectively as younger ones since they lack the strength to tackle hard labor.

Hence, they are more likely to be laid off which will practically diminish the national workforce in this area.

In conclusion, the expanding number of older people in comparison to younger people is decidedly a negative development since it will place a massive burden on the state budget and reduce the productivity of the labor force.

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In the coming decades Trong các th⌀p k椃ऀ tới

To put a strain on sth Gây lên căng thẳng cho c愃Āi g椃

Serious and often costly ailments B⌀nh t⌀t nghiêm trọng và gây tĀn kém

National workforce Lực lượng lao đ⌀ng quĀc gia

Securing their country’s economic growth Đ愃ऀm b愃ऀo tăng trưởng kinh tĀ c甃ऀa đĀt nước Impede economic growth C愃ऀn trở tăng trưởng kinh tĀ

Meaningful strides Những bước tiĀn c漃Ā ý nghĩa

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The first reason why people should learn a language is that they will gain a more

profound insight into foreign cultures. As they acquire a language, they can truly

understand local customs and traditions by reading original literary works or watching

documentaries. For example, a Vietnamese student who is proficient in Hindi, one of

the official languages in India, would know that head shaking in India does not mean

no and the gesture for yes looks like a no in other cultures. As a result, mutual

misunderstandings and cultural shock are more likely to be avoided, allowing them

to better adapt to a new environment.

The second reason for my agreement is that language acquisition enables people to

have more effective communication. They can feel more confident when entering a

conversation in a foreign language, facilitating their understanding of how a sentence

is structured or how a new word is applied in the right context. To illustrate, a tourist proficient in French tends to more actively interact with local people during his vacation

in France, forging a stronger bond among them. As a result, this will bring an

enlivening and memorable traveling experience. These benefits cannot be provided

by using translation software as it will be a cold personal interaction.

In conclusion, I strongly believe language translation platforms cannot replace the need to learn a new language as it fosters a process of cultural exchange and improves

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Gain a more profound insight into C漃Ā được cái nhìn sâu sắc hơn v

Acquire a language TiĀp thu, học m⌀t ngôn ngữ

Better adapt to a new environment Thích nghi tĀt hơn với mơi trường mới

Form deeper relationships Hình thành các mĀi quan h⌀ sâu sắc hơn

Facilitate their understanding of Tăng cường hiऀu biĀt v

An enlivening and memorable traveling

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13. 16/4/2022

Question: The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produce positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

ANSWER (8.0+):

It is argued that the proliferation of global corporations and internationalization offers

benefits to all people. I strongly agree with the aforementioned statement because of

reasons relating to a higher level of employment and enhanced cross-cultural communication skills.

One legitimate reason to support this trend is that it brings more job opportunities for

local people. Since international firms, which open their branches in different countries, require a high level of workforce, they will need to recruit more local employees to

operate the business. As a result, the natives are offered a decent occupation with lucrative incomes to cover their living expenses and in some cases, spend more

generously on their shopping. For example, Samsung, a renowned Korean technology corporation, has created a large number of jobs for Vietnamese since 2018, through

cooperating with the local government to successfully tackle the high unemployment rate in Vietnam.

Another major aspect is that people have a chance to develop multi-cultural communication skills as globalization is promoted. On a personal level, it is now easy

for workers to learn about foreign cultures and customs, enabling them to acquire more knowledge and insight into varying international practices. As they are exposed to

cross-cultural diversity in their working environment and society, they would become more able to show their empathy and tolerate cultural differences. At the company

level, globalization leads to a more diverse range of potential business partners and

diversifies their investment portfolios, which contributes to their profit generation.

Therefore, having global partnerships is essential for businesses to compete in the growing international market.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that this trend is a positive development for every individual since it offers more jobs in local areas and stimulates better cross-cultural communication. Therefore, the government should encourage the process of globalization and multinational companies setting up in their countries.

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Cross-cultural communication skills Những k礃̀ năng giao tiĀp đa văn h漃Āa

Be offered a decent occupation with lucrative

incomes Được mời m⌀t công vi⌀c tĀt với thu nh⌀p cao

Tackle the high unemployment rate Gi愃ऀi quyĀt tỷ l⌀ thĀt nghi⌀p cao

Develop multi-cultural communication skills Ph愃Āt triऀn k礃̀ năng giao tiĀp đa văn h漃Āa

Tolerate cultural differences ChĀp nh⌀n những sự kh愃Āc bi⌀t văn h漃Āa

Diversify investment portfolios Đa d愃⌀ng h漃Āa danh m甃⌀c đ

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To begin with, films and books are not a superior way for young people to learn good behaviors as there are many negative role models in most of them. To be more specific,

characters in such forms are usually idealized or exaggerated to appeal to audiences; therefore, they often possess a set of behaviors that are regarded as immoral and

violent in reality. For example, the image of the Joker in the movie with the same name is cruel and aggressive but admired by numerous young people in the world since he is considered to be a hero in some ways. As a result, many tend to imitate his actions in

real life without realizing that these are wrong and have dire consequences.

Another reason why I disagree is that people have a stronger emotional reaction to real experiences which means they learn more from them. First, they can remember what they gained more vividly. In fact, if they behave badly and are criticized by others, they could realize that their actions are totally wrong and annoy others to a significant extent; thus, they are more likely to avoid making the same mistakes in the future. It is also scientifically proven that knowledge is stored for a longer period of time if people

experience it on their own due to a combination of senses. Furthermore, first-hand experiences enable young people to decide which behaviors suit them the most. This

is because they will be learning behavior in areas that they need whereas books and movies might be showing behavior in contexts that are not relevant to them.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the idea that movies and books instill good behaviors in young people since characters are often presented with violent behaviors,

and learning through experience is more effective to control behavior and attitudes

as they can be better stored and are more suitable for each individual. Therefore,

parents should try to optimize the experiences that their children have so that they

can develop into moral citizens.

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Hands-on experiences Những tr愃ऀi nghi⌀m thực tĀ

Idealized or exaggerated Lý tưởng h漃Āa hoặc ph漃Āng đ愃⌀i

Possess a set of behaviors Sở hữu m⌀t t⌀p hợp c愃Āc h愃

Have dire consequences C漃Ā h⌀u qu愃ऀ nghiêm trọng

A combination of senses Sự kĀt hợp c甃ऀa c愃Āc gi愃Āc quan